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Shopping. Tranquila x Roslan

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:points: Commish for :iconaxe-cell:

I hope you like it. Lol I dont really.
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Kiri-No-Uta's avatar
Looks very cute Sera <33
May I give you a little critique ?
Good points :
I love your style seriously. Nice folds, expressions and poses :3
As usual , your hair shading is like *u* The eyes are very well colored <333

To improve :D
I had to point this out, even if I fail at doing this, The girls boobs seems a little to low :C
More work on hands :3 ~
The overall looks awesome, but I think you should try to make the characters look more important than the background. The colors are too close and the eye looks at it without really any attention to details ..
I can't seem to figure out the orientation of the light on the girls dress x.x.
Again on the background, that shop with vivid colors, well is too vivid , and the eye tends to look more at it than the characters.
The guys arm looks a little short to me o.o But maybe it's just me xD
Ask me If you don't get a thing, my english really sucks.


Anyway, I loke your prespective, the colors are great, the shading is very well made,
Keep up the awesome Work <33